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Lijus Terin

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Posted: 01. 03. 2005. 03:14

Joined: 30. 01. 2005. 22:21
Posts: 250
Location: ANDOR

svrtko wrote:

Evo par mojih nazovi poema....

ZALAZAK

IMAO SAM SLIJEPOG,DVOGLAVOG PRIJATELJA
RASTAO JE UZ KROTITELJA PLAMENA
ZARONJEN U OGLEDALO PROSLOSTI
ZIVIO JE OD DANAS DO SUTRA
BJESE TO U VRIJEME INKVIZICIJE
U VREMENU MRACNE PRAZNINE
UHVATISE GA U SVETIONIKU
NAREDJENJE JE BILO RASPORITI
SVETIONIK JE POPUT NJEGOVE KRVI
CEKAO ZALAZAK SUNCA
NJEN TUZNI MAJCINSKI POGLED
PROKLINJAO JE DAN SVOG PORODA
ODREDI DZELATA SMRTI
UGASISE JOJ VJERU U ZIVOT
TAKAV JE BIO MOJ CUDNI PRIJATELJ...

TEZAK VAZDUH

TEZAK VAZDUH
TESKO SE I DISE
TESKO VRIJEME
JA NE MOGU VISE
NADA ZADNJA UMIRE
NAMA JE DAVNO UMRLA....

Tuzno jako tuzno , toliko tuzno da mi se prisralo , a znas kako sam ja depresivan kada mi se to desi!!!

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grave-digger

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Posted: 03. 03. 2005. 00:49

Joined: 27. 02. 2005. 22:16
Posts: 7
Location: Cemetery

DOLINA SUZA

Sve Å¡to vidim jesu smrt i patnja
svuda oko mene meso i krv
vazduh zaudara na truleÅ¾
zadah smrti prejak je tu

Satanova vojska teror ovdje vrÅ¡i
cijel svijet u tami poÄinje da se ruÅ¡i
ljudska rasa osjeÄ‡a samo bol i strah
majka Zemlja udiÅ¡e svoj posljednji dah

O BoÅ¾e daj mi snage da se oduprem
odjednom Äujem sebe kako viÄem:
''U ovoj dolini suza ne bojim se nikakvog zla''
iznad mene leti vojska anÄ‘ela

Prejaki su anÄ‘eli za demone gladne
svuda teku potoci krvi crne paklene
u strahu i patnji zlo preklinje dobro
''Milost, milost gospodo milost''

AnÄ‘eli su dobri pruÅ¾aju im milost
demoni odlaze brÅ¾e nego svijetlost
al' prizor na Zemlji joÅ¡ uvijek je ruÅ¾an
moje oÄi vide propast zbog toga sam tuÅ¾an

Stanovnici Zemlje sad su mrtve duÅ¡e
sreÄ‡u ovdje naÄ‡i ne moÅ¾e se viÅ¡e
ovaj straÅ¡ni prizor moje srce sijeÄ‡e
i oÄi mi jako i okrutno peÄ‡e

I odlazim idem u susret sreÄ‡i
u sebi tiho ponavljam rijeÄ‡i
''U ovoj dolini suza ne bojim se nikakvog zla''
dok ka nebu letim na krilima anÄ‘ela.

Imam ja toga jos.

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Nemesis

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Posted: 03. 03. 2005. 01:15

Joined: 18. 04. 2004. 17:53
Posts: 1046

joj gledam ovu najezdu opakih i zastrasujucih djela... manite se tih jeftinih klisea, evo nesto samo zato sto vise ne mogu da gledam iste stvari, istu bit ponavljanu u svakom...

Izasao si iz svojih kostiju i tvoji krvavi tragovi su ostali na mom bijelom kamenju. Bolje bi bilo da zaboravis sve i nastavis hodati noseci na ramenima svoj nemir - nemoj kvariti savrsenstvo i spokoj ovih ljudi - oni te ne poznaju i zbog toga si stranac, a stranci su gotovo uvijek nepozeljni, zar ne? Tvoje oci nisu kao njihove, ti gledas u ono sto se nalazi IZNAD oblaka i trazis smisao u svemu - no smisla nema, ne postoji...
Lutalice, sretan ti put na tvojoj zivotnoj potrazi; ne skreci pogled ka zvijezdama i ne obaziri se na njihove prezrive poglede... sakrij se negdje u mracni kutak i obori glavu u teznji ka smrcu.
Ti si pobjednik.

inace autorica je student Leila Colak, ovo sam izabrala nasumice iz zbirke tih poema i vragova koji bi uskoro trebali biti realizovani u njenu prvu izdatu knjigu "Mjeseceva Utopija"...

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Lijus Terin

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Posted: 03. 03. 2005. 01:37

Joined: 30. 01. 2005. 22:21
Posts: 250
Location: ANDOR

Fino , fino!!!

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heretik Rajko

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Posted: 03. 03. 2005. 04:27

Joined: 02. 03. 2005. 03:30
Posts: 219
Location: sarajevo

pa se ono kaÅ¾e:Ostao bez teksta.

Nek se ventiliÅ¡e,nek je nama omladina Å¾iva i zdrava.Umjetnost je uvijek niÅ¾e ventila.Bila.

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TotalKhasma

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Posted: 04. 03. 2005. 22:25

Joined: 26. 07. 2004. 12:54
Posts: 2790

Nemesis wrote:

joj gledam ovu najezdu opakih i zastrasujucih djela... Ti si pobjednik. [/i]

hey ppl, better post sth intriguing, she's gettin' furious

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Nemesis

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Posted: 04. 03. 2005. 23:06

Joined: 18. 04. 2004. 17:53
Posts: 1046

khasma wrote:

Nemesis wrote:

hey ppl, better post sth intriguing, she's gettin' furious

yeah, or you'll get sth more...

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gorgoroth

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Posted: 08. 03. 2005. 02:07

Joined: 28. 02. 2005. 00:12
Posts: 3

evo jedna poezija

sataaaaaaan
fuck me jesus
fuuuuucckkkk
take my soul satan
fuck the god
funeral fog - jebo te bog
dylan dog
satan

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Pantanal

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Posted: 08. 03. 2005. 02:38

Joined: 22. 02. 2005. 01:12
Posts: 105
Location: Anal Äakowo

Evo jedna netom sroÄena, samo za vas glupe idiote fejkere

Metalac u Nuclear Blastu.wma

DoÅ¡o metalac u Nuclear Blast
Htio kupit od Borgira Stormblst
Al teta za pultom reÄe mu tad:
"Ti si jebeni fejker i glupi gad!"

Na rijeÄi te on otvori oÄ‡i
Od sramote silne htjede van poÄ‡i
ÄŒuo je samo smijeh il' neÅ¡ tako
I greÅ¡ku odluÄ‡i ispravit ovako:

"Dobro, teta, od danas Ä‡u true bit'!
KonaÄno sam shvatio da Borgiri su Å¡it!
Dajte vi meni Marduk i Funeral Dark
VeÄeras se idem nacugat u park!

Onda Ä‡u doma Å¾iletom rezat vene
GotiÄarkama Å¡trcat kroz pizdu svoje gene
O hvala vam sveci Å¡to shvatih tu bit
Da Dimmu Borgir je obiÄan Å¡it!"

Al tada u prostoriju uleti tu
Gospon Å agrat, onako sav true
A metalcu mladom s poÄetka pjesme
Ruke zadrhte, oko mu bljesne!

"Autogram mi daj, Äika Å agrate!
Ipak te volim viÅ¡e od svog tate!"
RekavÅ¡i to, komad papira mu pruÅ¾i
A Å agrat mirno olovkom zakruÅ¾i.

Tek Å¡to je postao true metal fan
Na Fejk level vrati se jadan
NiÅ¡ta od truoÄ‡e njegove nema
Ostat Ä‡e piÄke joÅ¡ dugo gladan

...
Å agrate, sotono Å¡to uÄini ti...
Tek Å¡to mu se otvoriÅ¡e oÄi, ti um mu pomuti
Gade jedan Borgirski, nek isus te jebe!
Juronimus nek Å¾ivi, nek ubiju tebe!

:twisted:

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.::Grind Bastard::.

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Posted: 09. 03. 2005. 04:42

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Posts: 5347
Location: Straight outta C(ompton)-5

ugurajte si ovaj Å¡uk do kraja anusa, jer protiv ovog slabo moÅ¾ete Å¡ta!

"The Fleshmincer (Putrefying Flesh And Acrid Emanation)"

My circular saw runs warm for guts
Your eyes plea for compelled death
Starting from the feet, to the arms
Wounds sanitized and blood purified

My mind is all battered with booze
And acrid intestinal supstances ooze
Stewing the meat in my basement
Every grasp at the flesh is pleasant

The house submerges in decomposing meat
Reeks from chloroform and formaldehyde
Volatile anesthetics to tie and slaughter
Victims beg, then dissolve in muriatic acid

Look inside my freezer full of frozen heads
Neatly salten and packaged in plastic bags
To prevent the capitae from freezer burn
As I make the blood brew and fats churn

Feasting on pieces of the slowly emanating corpse
I ejaculate in crops, in digestation of guts
Adoring flesh and preying for the orgiastic thrill
A skull perforated by an electric drill

I receive much pleasure from every blow
Sadistically debauched from decomposing beef
I emerge in blood from the depths of lunacy
Stashing up on piles my twisted sanguinary

These nauseating chapters of culinary necrosis
Planted into my deranged mind to crave the dead
Born with a decadent favor for surgical resection
Mincing and molding flesh to its perfection

ili ovoga!

"Amputated Limbs Corrode"

By killing I ensure my domain of raw butchery
Hardening pleasures, vomiting inside a cavity
The rigorous embrace, her last until the grave
With tools of disfigurement wounds are engraved

I slaughter to breed...malignancy, nurturing a
Sick way of life, to complete what others leave

I start to shape a disgraceful embodiment of gore
A cabinet of horror, world of carnage forevermore
The knife so deep below the slowly melting flesh
Killing till tons of wasted bodies anatomically mesh

The dissected and amputated limbs rot
In putrescence, innards burst from sores

Faces so degenerate and removed from skulls
Decorate walls of torment in excruciating fields
Morbidly malpractising on your disrupted insides
Dissolving tissue, ripping putrescent intestines

Remaining bowels forced to involuntarily constipate
I sterilize the knife to sever, malform and mutilate
Slicing across slabs of pure fat, molten to sludge
From infested arteries flows brown reeking blood

Corporal pits luted to diminish the mordant stench
Corpse-fields manured with corpses and dog flesh
Coprophagi feast on dry feces to fertilize the soil
Within disemboweled bodies blood and liquids boil

"Catatonic Defiance"

Visions of dead, a perfect bloodshed
Pools of red, severed and served,
Soon maggot food as intestines drool
Adrenaline thrills, rampant kills
Monopolized death industry
Weapons for anyone
Death to everyone
Goremanistic instincts breed
Scorched humanoid seed
The races non-defiant, we bleed
And so we die, eradicated greed

Pestilenced tribulation
Blood-drained asphyxiation
Collateral soul ablation
Intestines' regurgitation

Slowly mildews gather
On the rancid bodies
We rot, decompose, crop
Hot blood drifts into the seas
We lay amongst our enemies
Suffer same pain, vultures
Feast on the flesh so sanguine
Blood-drenched soil
All for the fucking oil

This catatonic defiance, our doom
A final grunt into empty space
of the dead world
Human's tribulation within Earth's innards
The definite end for us retards

Hot blood drifts into the seas
We lay amongst our dead enemies
Suffer the same pain, vultures
Feast on flesh, drink from veins

This catatonic defiance, our doom
A final grunt into empty space
of the dead world
Human's tribulation within Earth's innards
The definite end for us retards

"Purification Through Incineration"

Purification through incineration
Cleansing the world from pestilence
Summoning the loath's final scourge
To see the plague's spawn engorged

The formula is given - start the sequences

Incise the spawn for the feast
Fetal insemination of the apocalypse
A befouled and desecrated stench
Of moneywhores, rotten and consumed

Hypocrite fuckers slowly drowning
Into bilious ooze, profuse bleeding
Enteral corruption, defective system
Killing its constructor, socalled politicians

Into despise I send my thoughts
For barbecue grinding grubs
Suckers beaten to mashed pulp
Roasted and grilled - hungry pubs!

Eaten by incinerating sore
Imminent foreseen doom and gore
Man's crawling ends, dying starts
Tardy regrets - incineration starts!!!

As internal organs burn
And blood and liquids churn
The cranium disbands
Tissue is formed to glands
Excreting the souls demise
A new being will be cultivated
To scorch the earth in time
To die and be purified again

ja BI OVAKO MOGO JOÅ GINAMA JER OVOG IAMAM NJA KAKMARE A SVE JE MOJE!

"Disinterred Ways"

Harshly exhumed territories
Tombstones broken, crosses burning
Violated graves witness of deeds
Fulfilled in the dismal night
Nails stuck in the coffin lids
Mouths filled with ejaculated seeds
The eyes stab out the cavities
A smile adorns the striken corpses

By disinterred ways of life
Of a necrophile

The guts snatched, the genitals smashed
Skin peeled from the breasts
Throat's dissected and wounds infected
With great amounts of excrements
Entrails expelled from the abdomen area
Stuffed inside the anal tract and back
The face devoured, ridiculous art

By disinterred ways of life
Of a necrophile

I smell the vapor of the dead
The hunger for tissue is satisfied
Was this me, was I not asleep
The disease must have invaded my dreams

Pervaded lungs, full of urin by yesterday
The liver drenched with smoking tar
Hair moisten of blood spilled from my veins
Alcohol will clean my wounds and kill the pain

But the hunger is still not satisfied
The morgue will be the next...

"Rivers Of Blood/Piles of Human Waste"

With my gun, deep inside the Vietcong
I'm in to obliterate the rice-eating scum
Among festering soldiers I sneak along
A blood-red river, swarming of dead
Bodies, I stand alone on the field
Endlesss it seems, my war is endless
It ends when they are all hung up
the trees to rot in the evening sun

Single bullet theory, suicide command
In for the kill, never coming back
Only my hatred left, despise drives me

Cartridges on the swampen ground
Til I'm dead I cannot be found
Imperceptible for the enemy and too
shrewd as to give up as the war is lost
It's lost when I'm dead, or the shitters
Gathered on putrid piles, eyes stiff,
still see the dyings, testify of inhuman
Killings, and the killing never ends

Til the suckers are dead, til I'm fed
With their purulent blood
All turned into dust and pulp

Piles of bodies grow, so does my scorn
Aim, shoot, reload , and kill again, reload
Napalm scorches all inside the trench
Villages eradicated, women raped
Children strained to eat each of them
A notorious bloodbath, necrophagi
Eat the fried, we are the cure
They are just another plaque

Undying violence remains
As I lie in a lake of
Blood, lymph and brain
No resurrection, only mental absence
My mind is dead, but hate runs still
Thru my veins

I die insane...
ha ha ha

Imal ko bolji, hajde ba, nek se neko dokaÅ¾e!L-L-L-LOOOOSSSER!

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.::Grind Bastard::.

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Posted: 09. 03. 2005. 04:44

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Location: Straight outta C(ompton)-5

Zaboravih ovaj biser knjiÅ¾evnosti!

"Feast On Burek"

Sjeckano, mljeveno, sve se jede
Burek, sarma i Ä‡evapi
Zeljenica u masnom, pita od jabuka
Slatka da ti prisjedne ko baklava

Feast on burek!

Sirnica, izgorjelo meso, pusti to
Sve Å¡to je dobro i Å¡to valja je masno
Moje omiljeno je krumpiruÅ¡a
Sa pravim irskim krumpirom

Feast on burek!

Tuljumbe, tuljumbe, tuljumbe!
Baklavaaa!!!
Krempita, Å¡ampita, moja kita!
Kifla!!!

Feast on burek!
Feast on burek till death
Go now and visit a SlastiÄarna
And then an AÅ¡Ä‡inica!!!

Bon appetite...

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.::Grind Bastard::.

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Posted: 13. 03. 2005. 03:35

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Jebo Dino Merlin mater sviju komercijalnu (ma volim ja Dinu i njegovu muziku

).Napiso sam pjesmu o Bureku prije njega joÅ¡ davno.Samo fali da mi joÅ¡ mane pjesme o iznitricama!

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Ljen Guzich

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Posted: 05. 04. 2005. 06:02

Joined: 13. 02. 2005. 04:16
Posts: 45

Situs adzav ogen senkerd
en dakin otsaz situm endop
od ukerms savahukaz efak
mortuj pop ucon azdok ujnad
savas-rvzi hi arovogop zeb
samirp ebderan eto gonsarts
do obab-latem ajdov invohud
nacom ogonm is okai
savzezd eht fo drol

Shta velite o ovome

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stari serator

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Posted: 05. 04. 2005. 06:57

Joined: 02. 09. 2003. 17:08
Posts: 10631

uzas postajes pravo morbidan...Russ utiche...

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Black Ofca

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Posted: 06. 04. 2005. 04:11

Joined: 03. 04. 2004. 04:50
Posts: 870

PROLJEV

Kad nekud ides pjeske
A gace su ti teske
Proljev!
Proljev!

Kad ti se nekud jako zuri
A niz nogavice ti curi
Proljev!
Proljev!

Kada si u skoli
A nesto ti se proli
Proljev!
Proljev!

- originalan autorski rad mojih prijateljica i mene u osnovnoj skoli -
- pjesme je inace i uglazbljena

Jebiga, nemam ja smisla za uzvisenije stvari od ovoga

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Elan Morin Tedronai

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Posted: 06. 04. 2005. 04:16

Kad procitas neke radove koji su napisani u krajje ozbiljnoj mjeri ovakav ti postane umjetnost.

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DR.Pill

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Posted: 07. 04. 2005. 20:57

Joined: 06. 04. 2005. 22:58
Posts: 260

Vrtic<Mladih Nada>

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Black Ofca

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Posted: 11. 04. 2005. 16:56

Joined: 03. 04. 2004. 04:50
Posts: 870

Vidim ja da se vi uopce ne kuzite u umjetnost

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.::Grind Bastard::.

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Posted: 12. 04. 2005. 21:18

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Black Ofca wrote:

Jebiga, nemam ja smisla za uzvisenije stvari od ovoga

dosad nisam znao Å¡ta je PRAVA umjetnost ali sada znam i prosvijetljen sam!samo dalje tako, nek proljev curi,...Å¡mrc.... :cry:

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Black Ofca

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Posted: 14. 04. 2005. 06:54

Joined: 03. 04. 2004. 04:50
Posts: 870

hahahhaha
Pa dobro, nije bas vrhunac umjetnosti. Ali to je jedina pjesma koju sam ikad napisala. Znam da ima boljih, Ali ova je moja. I jedina.

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