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Black Ofca
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Vidim ja da se vi uopce ne kuzite u umjetnost :P
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.::Grind Bastard::.
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Black Ofca wrote:
PROLJEV

Kad nekud ides pjeske
A gace su ti teske
Proljev!
Proljev!

Kad ti se nekud jako zuri
A niz nogavice ti curi
Proljev!
Proljev!

Kada si u skoli
A nesto ti se proli
Proljev!
Proljev!


- originalan autorski rad mojih prijateljica i mene u osnovnoj skoli -
- pjesme je inace i uglazbljena
8)

Jebiga, nemam ja smisla za uzvisenije stvari od ovoga :P


dosad nisam znao Å¡ta je PRAVA umjetnost ali sada znam i prosvijetljen sam!samo dalje tako, nek proljev curi,...Å¡mrc.... :cry: :cry: :lol:
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Black Ofca
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hahahhaha
Pa dobro, nije bas vrhunac umjetnosti. Ali to je jedina pjesma koju sam ikad napisala. Znam da ima boljih, Ali ova je moja. I jedina. :(
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.::Grind Bastard::.
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znaš šta,možda bi trebala probat sa haiku ili hiku poezijom, nakva japanska poezija u tri reda i gotovo,...Beavis i butt-Head su majstori u tome :D :lol:

heh
hehemhmhhem
huh dude...
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Black Ofca
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Ceznja me mori
Jebiga
Sorry
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.::Grind Bastard::.
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I'm tired of your degen'r'ed fun
So tell me what I wanna know
Or I'll blow you away... with my gun!
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biafra
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sve je smrt
ljudi oko mene su supci
svi me mrze
jer su supci
i zasluzuju smrt
kao i ja
i oni prije mene
i oni poslije mene
jer su supci

ovo ja malo onako...u slobodnom stihu
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Shiteater black
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ova je najbolja do sad.
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stari serator
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ja sam napiso pjesmicu i metno je u potpis
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biafra
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Shiteater black wrote:
ova je najbolja do sad.


hvala ti,dragi,od tebe vazda imam podrsku
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Shiteater black
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znaš da sam uvijek uz tebe.
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Ravenlea
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hors power.... :roll:
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biafra
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Ravenlea wrote:
hors power.... :roll:


:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Black Ofca
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How much does it take to numb your pain
How long does it take to kill your brain

:)
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Shiteater black
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kao zapostavljenu kjniževnu formu, moram ubaciti jedan (konstrukcijski) netipičan haiku:

želim te poševiti
u Å¡upak
au faking jea
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El Foxinho
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kad ce ta zbirka?
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Frau
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SILENCE OF DESTRUCTION

when you are gone and
doomed on eternal memory
you are becoming an immortal mute...

your only cemetary guest is reven
your monument was covered by weed
your name forgotten
and you are still chained to silence...

you are roaring on infetuated world
trying to tell that theres no god
theres no superior leader
just windy minds of dead ones...

you are shreaking till your strings break up
and all is heard was breath of gentle gale...

crypt is not just silence
silence is not just doomed blindeness
its course of possessed brains
cuz they dont realise that
they are waisting their time
on prayers and onesided god love...
silence hear everything...


TEARS CANNOT ACCOUNT

what death is seperating
tears cannot account
but pain is not pain
when its quiet in soul...

lost soul is wishing not to be forgotten
but it seems that this one has already
becoming a part of that pain...

im a wave without beach
a soul without salvation
this place was simply made
for minds like mine...

for what ive done
for what ive felt
i have my trial on your lips...
bells will toll when i hear lords voice
and ill drown my pain
in the sea of sorrow...

pith of this song noone will reach
thats fortune of my mind
but tears cannot account the price...
im doomed so are you...


SILENT DEATH

the sea of memories is raising in my eye
and my oath came down...

i cannot fake it anymore...
smile full of life sarcasm
needle in my heart gained by mind misery
i was just collecting pieces of my past
to build my future of them...

my room is empty, the wind has played
his last symphony and turned
the pages of his notation...
unessential storm is departing slowly
noone notice that one soul was traped
in world blinded by faith...
it doesnt matter now...
im gone..
all i wanted was make doomed realise
what death means...

i cry cuz souls cannot go anywhere
they hurt and in the end
i only hear womans scream...

im dead my flesh is cold
vulture is already there...
the final wave of my life
is flowing into the sea of death...
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Innuendo
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patetično
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Frau
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Innuendo wrote:
patetično


mislis na moje??? :roll: ako je tako ne zanima me dobila sam pohvale od mnogo ozbiljnijih osoba i njihova misljenja cijenim...
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Rotor
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Gledam u nebo,a ne vidim sunce
Gledam u travu koja nema boju
Gledam u tebe ti ne vidis mene
Crtam po zidu ne ostaje nista

Necu da budem shvacen
Mrzim znake spoznaje
Zelim samo prostor i
da me niko ne prepoznaje
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